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C* nekomaroo

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this is for :iconnekomaroo: i hope you like it >////<

 
i based the outfit off the modern fantasy clothing.

owo i was playing around with how i color hair and clothing.
the hips and the shape of the face bothers me a bit... but over all i like how this turned out.  SpeedPaint

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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

She looks so cute *w*

The linework is pretty clear, and you varied the thickness of the lines, which makes this picture looking more happy and "free".
Her proportions are mostly okay, in my opinion the neck is too small where it connects the shoulders. The outer curve of her left arm was drawn in the wrong direction, it should be curved to the outside, not to the insinde. The line on the left arm which should show the seperation of the upper arm and the forearm looks fake, because the line isn't really connected with the arms. The torso of the girl looks wonderful, and her legs are pretty perfect.
The face of the character is wonderful, it shows this cute expression really convincingly and expressive. Her pose also emphasizes the cute expression, because it's such a girly pose. You surely had a clear concept about what you want to draw, and how to paint it. Not many artists have such a clear concept like you !
Also, a good point is that you drew some accessoires which give life to the character, and make the picture looking more convincingly (like the heart, the necklace and the cute demon horns).
Although you used colors like red and pink together, or used warm and cold tones, the picture looks coherent, and with those different colors you made the image even more realistic.
The textures of the clothes look fantastic and really 3-dimensional, the only little mistake is the belt which doesn't look like it would lie/be attached rightly on the body, because the gap between belt and shirt was drawn too big.
The skin looks so beautiful and soft, it's amazing *w*
The only thing I don't like about your drawing is the hair. The yellowish pastell tones fit great to the atmosphere, but those brown stripes just confuse me, are that ribbons which are wrapped around the hair or are that hair strands ? I think those are hair strand; I'd suggest you to draw them in the direction of the rest of the hair.

You drew a really beautiful picture with a damn cute character *w*